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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 04-11-2006 02:47 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

The surge and swell
of oceanic void
permeates
my tears

and I drown
in the magnitude
of a droplet.

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

"Creating yourself is a spiritual act." ~ Susan Vreeland

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Between the Lines


1 posted 04-11-2006 09:17 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

and I drown
in the magnitude
of a droplet.


can't tell you how many times this has happened to me...although I continue to struggle through a tear or two...

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2 posted 04-11-2006 12:47 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Oh boy you have got that feeling down to a science!  Similar to the one I have felt that you could blow me over with a feather.  Nice to read you again, your work is so enjoyable.

Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem

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3 posted 05-14-2006 01:50 AM       View Profile for Musicmaker1969   Email Musicmaker1969   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Musicmaker1969's Home Page   View IP for Musicmaker1969

Wow.  Short but right to the point.  I've been where your poem leads.  I think we all have at some point in time.  I hope your tears are over and that this is a poem of the past and that sunshine fills your days now.  Very well done in such a short verse.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
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.....sigh.....yes, I know this pain.....

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