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Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

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In the space between moments

0 posted 2006-04-11 02:47 AM

The surge and swell
of oceanic void
permeates
my tears

and I drown
in the magnitude
of a droplet.

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

"Creating yourself is a spiritual act." ~ Susan Vreeland

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-04-11 09:17 AM

and I drown
in the magnitude
of a droplet.

can't tell you how many times this has happened to me...although I continue to struggle through a tear or two...

enjoyed
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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2006-04-11 12:47 PM

Oh boy you have got that feeling down to a science! Similar to the one I have felt that you could blow me over with a feather. Nice to read you again, your work is so enjoyable.

Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem

Musicmaker1969

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since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

3 posted 2006-05-14 01:50 AM

Wow. Short but right to the point. I've been where your poem leads. I think we all have at some point in time. I hope your tears are over and that this is a poem of the past and that sunshine fills your days now. Very well done in such a short verse.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2006-10-05 01:05 AM

.....sigh.....yes, I know this pain.....

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