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negative imagery (for Brian's workshop stuff)

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We could have lit up the sky,
you and I.
Star crossed, we were,
but never lovers.

We walked down the aisleway
of the supermarket,
carts and hearts never far apart,
pretending the sky held itself
up high in the brilliant blue,
just for me and you.

But it was not meant to be, you see;
for I could not quite see
beyond the end
of my short-sightedness,
into 3D serendipity.

We could have lit up the sky,
you and I.


*Brian, I'm sorry I had to post this in here, but I am apparently blocked from posting in the official workshop. It seems I never asked a moderator for permission to enter that forum, so it would not allow me to post this.
Is this write what you meant by negative imagery?


© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-04-2006 09:19 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

not sure about the challenge...but I enjoyed

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2 posted 03-04-2006 12:01 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Well Kacy I don't know much about what Bri talks about as he is over my head, but good for you for giving it a shot.  I really enjoyed this.  I have to tell you though that I have a few "loose stars" floating about myself that are sure negative energy.   You can picture me doing this now as it's true!
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Kacy

Maybe you should email Nan to get permission to post in the workshop?  Enjoyed the poem!
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4 posted 03-04-2006 02:21 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

I liked this

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Ladies, thanks for reading this! I thought it was gone forever intovsome dark pit.
Is Brian not around anymore?
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I enjoyed this.  It was full of emotion and to me although it was negative imagery there is a lot of love that shines from your poem.  I very much enjoyed this.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
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