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Marshalzu
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0 posted 2005-08-02 05:01 PM


An accident?
or perhaps we met on purpose
at the place we first kissed.


I know these short poems aren't really popular but I find them incredibly therapeutic to write.

© Copyright 2005 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2005-08-03 08:17 AM


Andrew,
no this is fascinating . . .
I have so much difficulty writing anything short and this leaves much to be thought about . . . definitely has me on my toes this early.

See?  I DO believe in fate, I think nothing is pure consequence, but then again, IS everything really just happenstance?  This could start a huge philosophical discussion alone.  Plus, its lovely, the place you speak of - brings strong memories to anyone's mind.

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2 posted 2005-08-06 08:22 PM


I enjoy short writes that lead me down long thought paths. Thank you, for offering another one.
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3 posted 2006-05-15 02:26 AM


I've never seen a poem so short yet so full of emotion and movement.  I think this is a very interesting and new way to write.  Very well done!

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

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