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A peaceful goodbye

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

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0 posted 2005-06-01 07:37 PM

All things come to natural end
But I never really knew
That peace could come, and He could send
That peace, through something but you

The winding road has been quite long
Which we've traveled together, friend
We've fought together, with our song
And now, we're at the end

I'm sorry for the mistakes I've made
As we've walked along our way
And later on, though all may fade
Please remember what I say

You have made me who I am
And I hope I've helped you too
Just know that leaving you is sad
But you'll be here in all I do

Forgive my cliches, forgive my
Mistakes in meter and rhyme
Just remember any good I've done
I don't think we've wasted our time

No dramatic pause I mean for you
No flashes of light, or dark
I just mean to fade.. adieu
It is time for us to part

This is to a dear friend here. You know you you are.

Love's a lovely lad
His bringing up is beauty
Who loves him not is mad
For I must pay him duty
-Anonymous

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-06-01 08:08 PM

this is touching and heartfelt...sure glad it isn't for me though or I would be bawling!!!

Musicmaker1969

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since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

2 posted 2006-05-14 02:07 AM

A very beautiful poem as a dedication to an unknown person to the reader but to the person it is intended for. I pray your sorrow one day turns into rays of sunshine and joy. A very good poem.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

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3 posted 2006-10-08 10:34 AM

Sad but good, good but sad....a poem that anyone might send to someone who has been a blessing to them, and whose memory will always be.

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