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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


0 posted 02-05-2005 03:10 AM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for BluesSerenade


~*~*~*~*~*~

Passing notes through a blur unseen
tracing silhouettes along the edge
strung out in a pointless fray,
unraveling.

Balancing shadows in the light of day
my slip shows in the moonlight,
bestowing the clarity
leading into the darkness.

As Clouds roll in slow motion
convinced of my own reflection
that it is I who am a contradiction,
unsettled.

Like a snow glob tipped upside down
hanging in the mist,
lingers tenaciously between the sea and sky,
down pouring on my bliss.

As expected, the star lights are endless no shows
like the obscurity of meaningless alibis,
concluding my rendezvous in blue
save for the sunburn on my lips.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~

To my friends, thank you for caring.
And to my foes, please forgive my ways.
I hope that love will find you and keep you, always~

Sincerely,
~~~Bluesy~~~
© Copyright 2005 BluesSerenade - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


1 posted 02-05-2005 08:10 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

As Clouds roll in slow motion
convinced of my own reflection
that it is I who am a contradiction,
unsettled.

I understand this, Lori

hope you are doing well

hugs
M
Martie
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2 posted 02-05-2005 10:57 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Lori Hi!

"As Clouds roll in slow motion
convinced of my own reflection
that it is I who am a contradiction,
unsettled."

This is so very beautiful, as are you!  
iliana
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3 posted 02-09-2005 01:15 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Hi, Lori.  Gosh, it's been awhile since I've been in here much.  This really flowed in such a lovely, gentle bluesy way.  *hugs to you* .....jo
Ratleader
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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass


4 posted 02-09-2005 10:04 AM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

You know it's so.....know it.....

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 02-16-2006 07:27 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

sweetie it is so good to read you.
This piece was so beautiful I couldn't even begin to pick a favorite verse.  
I have missed you. I've tried emailing you hon, to let you know that you are thought of often.  HUGS!!!!

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

Sunshine
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6 posted 02-25-2006 06:42 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Lori...

Have I ever thanked you properly
for all you've brought to us,
as readers?

I should have...
I do now.

Thank you, and for the date you wrote it,
I may have a personal favor to ask...



Larry C
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7 posted 02-25-2006 12:16 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

To my friends, thank you for caring.
And to my foes, please forgive my ways.
I hope that love will find you and keep you, always~
========================================
And to you for all you are and do - thank you. Don't ever forget I pray for you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

BluesSerenade
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8 posted 03-12-2006 02:00 AM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

I haven't been in the sanctuary in what seems like forever.  
I'm afraid I was on shakey ground when I wrote this.

However trite it may sound, life is truly what we make it.  
Thank you all so much for being here.
Ratleader
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9 posted 03-12-2006 11:27 AM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

And thank you, dear lady.

You inspire....always, in all ways.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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