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quietlydying
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the wonderful land of oz


0 posted 05-24-2004 04:31 PM       View Profile for quietlydying   Email quietlydying   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for quietlydying

It's no wonder
these
tremors and
miseries persist
in the most
tormenting of ways.
Granulated sugar
wearing away/grinding down
what's left of
your sanity.

Have a stranger live
your fantasy and
then toss you the
inked remains
from over their
envied shoulder.

To dream is to die.

/jeni/



'Christianity is the complete negation of common sense and sound reason.'
-- Mikhail Bakunin

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (05-24-2004 05:19 PM).]

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1 posted 05-24-2004 04:49 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Not long ago I was wondering where you had dissappeared to, it nice to see you here and a pleasure to read you again.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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Between the Lines


2 posted 05-24-2004 05:34 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Have a stranger live
your fantasy and
then toss you the
inked remains
from over their
envied shoulder.


wonderful writing...

M
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3 posted 05-24-2004 08:16 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Please toss more thoughts this way, more often. I personally have felt like tossing most of my writes into the recycle bin lately. LOL.
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4 posted 06-01-2004 08:52 AM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

Have a stranger live
your fantasy and
then toss you the
inked remains
from over their
envied shoulder.

One of the most outstanding lines I've read in a long time.
Marshalzu
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5 posted 06-01-2004 09:00 AM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

Wonderful writing
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6 posted 06-06-2004 06:21 PM       View Profile for fractal007   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fractal007

I especially enjoyed the last line of this one.  Good write all round.

2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2
--Smit
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