How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Sanctuary
 Poetic Haven
 No Words   [ Page: 1  2  ]
 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38
Follow us on Facebook

 Moderated by: Poet deVine, Martie   (Admins )

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

No Words

 Post A Reply Post New Topic   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Greeneyes
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 09-09-2000
Posts 10848
In Your Poetic Mind


25 posted 05-10-2004 04:45 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Of fine words you are...and we? so lucky!
I play peek-a-boo every now and then in here....so glad I did!

~~**~~
le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
~~**~~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 01-22-2000
Posts 18986


26 posted 05-10-2004 09:39 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Hey...its 2 of my groovies...DS-boyeeeee and L-girliegirl.

thank you guys... I appreciate your encouragement. So does me moooooody muse.

thanks to all who stopped by.

I love you more the further I go ...
before this existence ... you were always here inside of me.

Nelly Furtado

suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 07-29-99
Posts 20770
on the threshold of a dream


27 posted 05-11-2004 01:26 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Of scolding words, I have many....

Tell me again just WHY I had to stumble upon this??? LOL Don't you know my secret decoder ring is as old and decrepit as I am??? *G* It's not enough to have to wait on your muse... now we have to play hide and seek TOO??? LOL

You definitely deserve more grumbling... but your poem distracts me from that serious business and leads me straight into appreciation... and darn you... I was just getting started! *S*

I don't have to tell you how well I know the feelings you convey here so beautifully... but I will tell you I like seeing rhyme from your pen again. *S* And this doesn't lose any of its power with its brevity... Excellent work!!
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 01-22-2000
Posts 18986


28 posted 05-11-2004 11:41 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

ummmm...ummmm...
can I take the moth fifth???
my dog ate the email????
I couldnt see cuz the pretty blue flame was in my eye????
I'll gladly pay you on Tuesday for a poem today?????

OH COME ON... no mere moth can get in under Ruth-radar!!!!

Ok ok.... my bad....
I can only say sorry and put my muse in the corner for a month or so...hows that???



A FINE Scolding accounted for...(lmao)
also noted was the fine reply...thank you for the encouragement, as always you are gracious and kind to my mothy muse.
Thanks for tracking me down Ruthiegirl..
its not a party without you...youre the one that bakes the best cookies...and then there is those pickles.

I love you more the further I go ...
before this existence ... you were always here inside of me.

Nelly Furtado

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Caelestus
since 06-25-99
Posts 67715
Listening to every heart


29 posted 05-12-2004 10:13 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Who said pickles?
Mysteria
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 03-07-2001
Posts 19652
British Columbia, Canada


30 posted 05-12-2004 01:12 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Ah finally found it!  I guess I am like Bri, could have been longer JM, like two pages longer LOL.  I can't seem to get enough of you and have read the archives to death!  An exercise in being brief - you?  Well you succeeded that is for sure, and it said TONS in a little bit, so you passed Ron's class for sure.  I so identified with the last lines, that is why I am alone and loving it.  Richard got the verb right with his play on words -excersize-is good for you   

This place is kewl mothymama.
gemjop
Member Elite
since 11-18-2002
Posts 2663
Pencilveinia, USA


31 posted 06-01-2004 08:58 AM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

JM! Are you reading my mind???

nothing left to say but the truth...
~
Living without you ...
leaves me lacking even more.
~

Unfortunately, this brings tears to my eyes.

LIBRARY!
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 01-22-2000
Posts 18986


32 posted 06-01-2004 05:18 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Sharon....please forgive me...I could have sworn I replied back to you....guess thats when my comp was freezing up.... thank you for your generous response and your encouragement. ... better be careful what you wish for...too much of me will give ya a headache.


Gem... great minds think and cry alike? thank you so much girlie...its so good to have you back.
Ethan Halo
Senior Member
since 04-28-2000
Posts 820
on the roof again


33 posted 09-29-2007 08:56 AM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

I've found that redundancy can really become an issue.

But if you ask me, that was one hell of a poetic sigh.

You capture this feeling of frustration and desperation of needing those perfect words. And while these may not be the words to pin down the feelings you have, they certainly capture the poetic journey perfectly.
Larry C
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 09-10-2001
Posts 10765
United States


34 posted 01-22-2009 10:53 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Dearest JM,
=============================================
Of fine words ... I have none ...
there'll be no verse born of setting sun.
No rhymes to align clouds in linen sky ...
No poetic sighs ... no words have I.


Still, what's left to say that
I haven't said before?


Steal the stars from night ...

                wake to a dawnless morn ...
                                
                                    take the tides from the shore ...


Living without you ...
leaves me lacking even more.
=============================================
And yet we both know that "Living with you" is what led us to the knowledge that left us "lacking even more." None of which we would ever trade. And so it is the knowing that you are there that encourages me to press on.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 09-21-1999
Posts 28608
California


35 posted 01-22-2009 03:34 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Thanks Larry, for bringing this back up so that I could read it again.  I miss you Janet Marie!!  
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 02-02-2000
Posts 28839


36 posted 01-22-2009 06:59 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I, too, feel like Jan has never received proper worship.



Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 05-18-2001
Posts 29020
Gaia


37 posted 01-22-2009 09:31 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Wow, I missed this one in 04, where the heck was I? Thanks for bringing it back for these eyes.
I sure do miss you, JM.
Cpat Hair
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 06-05-2001
Posts 12075


38 posted 07-21-2010 12:20 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

Goes to show...good things last a long time...

here I am visiting this all these years later and marveling at what you did with so few words... and wishing of course, we saw more of your words today.

if you ever drop in and see this, just know I hope things in your world are good... time knows no master, but we mere humans do.

 
 Post A Reply Post New Topic   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Sanctuary >> Poetic Haven >> No Words   [ Page: 1  2  ] Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors