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Sunshine
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0 posted 04-24-2004 08:33 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Wisp

hands folding in minor
prayer, hoping

fingertips touching
keys

a music to be
born, adrift

to touch eyes, hearts,
souls

flitting,
snowflaking, butterflying, drifts

that

soft,

that

ethereally,

that

one

moment

~*~

thoughts
and
hands

melding
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1 posted 04-24-2004 09:07 PM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

But the wisp is traditionally misleading... isn't it?

Or did you intend that?  I'll read a second time...

~*~*~*~  (sunshiney break)

Alright, on second read, I think I understand you more clearly.  It's about music---ohh!---yeah, it's about music, the charming wisp that flutters magically before us like a ghost, and inspires feelings of longing and escape.

So it's that escape, not necessarily that misleading---

Glad I could solve that for myself.  Thanks for throwing me for a loop, mum---

Brian

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Almost right, my son....

music

poetry

muse

love

go ahead...touch your fingertips
but for a moment

of electric

in front of the screen
on the screen

and feel
the
moment

~*~

Now...

describe it
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3 posted 04-24-2004 09:18 PM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

Oh I

get it

if I

talk like

this

I'm

brilliant

and I

get it

of course

I could

be wrong

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4 posted 04-24-2004 09:53 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Now, did I ever say
I am brilliant?

Nope.

LOL...

Hugs....
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5 posted 04-25-2004 10:45 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

ROTFLMAO at you and LP, loveya both

wisping can be a shocking experience
when I only have one moment to wisp
I try to wisp in this forum
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6 posted 04-27-2004 12:27 AM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

I use "wisp" as a handle on the internet sometimes---

Strange, conicidence?  I like misleading people I suppose---and I'm pretty to look at.  

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7 posted 04-27-2004 08:47 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

LOL...I knew that....

both of 'em.
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8 posted 05-03-2004 02:28 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

I

love

this

HE

HE

HE

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9 posted 05-07-2004 11:26 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

You captured it...the very thing that I have been doing, this very evening. So far without reaching what I seek, but soon...soon, I can feel it. And this will help.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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10 posted 05-08-2004 09:09 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Ed...isn't it neat to know
we're not all that different
after all?
 
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