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Ladycat
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At the edge and a doorway,TX


0 posted 01-30-2004 06:25 AM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

I woke
There you were standing
Being who you wanted to be
Here I was
Being me
Or so I thought
I called out to the heavens
To release the spirits
I layed there baring my soul
My torment to you
Screaming
Why me?
Why me?
You touched my forhead lightly
You moved me
I write this for you
I drew my first masterpiece
I danced in your grace
I created a world
Music overcame me
The stage was set
Then you were gone..
I lived and loved life with you
I learned to love myself then
If only for a moment
I found me and
I was comforted again...

Love,
Ladycat


Dancing is the loftiest, the most moving, the most
beautiful of the arts, because it is no mere translation
or abstraction from life; IT IS LIFE I

[This message has been edited by Ladycat (01-30-2004 08:57 AM).]

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I think you've got it.  You learn to be yourself, and then you somehow.. can't.
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2 posted 06-07-2004 05:48 PM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

Wonderful writing, I really enjoyed the read
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