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Alicat
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0 posted 12-12-2003 10:38 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alicat

This morning, when I awoke
I stretched as I'm able
And nearly fainted dead away;
I had become invisible.

'Oh, what great fun to be had.'
I maliciously thought,
'So many things could I have
Which don't have to be bought!'

But something quickly changed
My thoughts on how to behave;
One thing about not being there:
It's a right bugger to shave!

Alicat
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1 posted 12-13-2003 03:41 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze



"these things must be done del-i-cately..." --the wicked witch of the west.

Midnitesun
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2 posted 12-13-2003 12:41 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

LOL, what a funny way to start the day.
Guess I wouldn't have to change outta  jammies or brush my hair, heh?
Local Parasite
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3 posted 12-15-2003 03:25 AM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

But you don't have to shave!  You're invisible!

Sigh.

I don't think I'd like being invisible either.  Just because I'm sick of hearing that Clay Aiken song on the radio and musing over the possibility of invisibility has kind of started annoying me.

Your poem was really cute though.  Thanks for sharing it with us, glad to see your words in this forum once again.

Brian

Faith is a fine invention
When gentlemen can see
But microscopes are prudent
In an emergency.
~~~Emily Dickinson

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4 posted 12-23-2003 04:56 AM       View Profile for Masked Intruder   Email Masked Intruder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Masked Intruder

Just because you can't see the facial hair, doesn't mean it stops itching.
inot2B
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5 posted 12-23-2003 03:09 PM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

What if you became visible without being aware of it?   Hey I just looked at your picture, I'm not too worried about you cutting "yourself" from shaving.

[This message has been edited by inot2B (12-23-2003 03:10 PM).]

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6 posted 12-26-2003 03:24 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Hehe! Such a cute little poem. It's good to see you around, although I've been just as invisible around here. Your beard is invisible though, so let it grow!

Brian, I got Clay's CD for Christmas Joy!

Oh, make me Thine forever
And should I fainting be
Lord, let me never ever
Outlive my love for Thee

 
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