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Ladycat
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0 posted 11-27-2003 07:20 AM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

Far away from home
A distant dream in the mind
Walk the road alone
You search to find something that you have lost
Beads of sweat run down your face and time floats away
One tear falls
Lands on a rose
The bloom opens and stares at the sky
This is life
Whispers all around
Touch my hand
Let me lead you
Breath and feel everything for the first time
Life
We live in a world of forgotten feelings
So thought is beyond you?
Just try to think for a change
Don't let life pass you by
As the whispers grow louder
There once was summer, but now it's winter
Hold tight until the rays of sun shine again
Wings of angels
Cats that smirk
We can only live in our fantasy for so long
Join the rest of the world
Learn
Teach
Share the whispers with others
And when you think you don't have a home
Make one
Don't ever feel too lonely
Don't ever feel alone
Just follow where the whispers take you

Love,
Ladycat

Dancing is the loftiest, the most moving, the most
beautiful of the arts, because it is no mere translation
or abstraction from life; IT IS LIFE I

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 11-27-2003 11:52 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Vynette~
Oh my stars ! ... how very, very lovely and wise is this write~

So truly nice to see you~
*Holiday Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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2 posted 12-02-2003 03:09 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allysa

So thought is beyond you?

I love that line.   Wonderous.
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3 posted 12-02-2003 10:22 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

I hope the journeys are the best ones..wherever they take me



lovely work

Its good to see you posting again.

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill

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4 posted 12-06-2003 03:25 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Very intriguing stream of consciousness direction of where one is within themselves, knowledge squared of ripples extending far beyond the puddle's pebble. There was an error in one line: Breath should be Breathe.

Have a good one, and I do hope things are settling in where you presently are.

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