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Marshalzu
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0 posted 11-17-2003 05:40 AM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

Three giants stand,
Towering.
Eyes closed and silent,
Cold as stone
And sleeping.


Rawr, rawr, rawr

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Brilliant
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A humourous little poem.  I am unsure that eyes make noise when they are not closed and inactive....?

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3 posted 12-23-2003 04:55 AM       View Profile for Masked Intruder   Email Masked Intruder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Masked Intruder

I've seen these three.  They follow me around and around, but I can only see them when I'm really sneaky about it.


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Too open-ended for my tastes, but I guess if that's what you're going for, then you pulled it off.  I miss reading your less vague works, because with your style, I prefer being told things to being asked them.

Just a personal pref.  Write more, Zu.

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Thanks for the replies.

Silent eyes... ahh yeah maybe i'll do a re-write some day.
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