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Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

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0 posted 2003-11-17 05:40 AM

Three giants stand,
Towering.
Eyes closed and silent,
Cold as stone
And sleeping.

Rawr, rawr, rawr

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-11-25 12:36 PM

Brilliant

fractal007
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since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

2 posted 2003-12-18 11:15 PM

A humourous little poem. I am unsure that eyes make noise when they are not closed and inactive....?

2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2
--Smit
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Masked Intruder

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since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

3 posted 2003-12-23 04:55 AM

I've seen these three. They follow me around and around, but I can only see them when I'm really sneaky about it.

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

4 posted 2004-01-17 08:36 PM

Too open-ended for my tastes, but I guess if that's what you're going for, then you pulled it off. I miss reading your less vague works, because with your style, I prefer being told things to being asked them.

Just a personal pref. Write more, Zu.

Brian

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
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5 posted 2004-06-07 05:58 PM

Thanks for the replies.

Silent eyes... ahh yeah maybe i'll do a re-write some day.

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