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Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2003-11-07 10:48 PM

** hey, wrote this about a year ago, revised it and thought i would post it again and see what you guys thought..its not that good so yea**
laugh,
       because you are hauntingly beautiful
imperfected in all your features
      your smile is senescent
looking past the eyes of a candle
      only to find the fire of a thought
you always [ seem ] to break the mold
       their core

you know,
        you are hauntingly beautiful
wispy, heat bound hair, frames, a brail eye
    one touch,
                 and your coal black skin turns to a late summer snow
                            all this hidden,
behind piercingly dull gray eyes that kill

cry,
        because you are hauntingly beautiful
     a droplet holds a thousand pieces of blood
the mirror cannot bring seven years, but a
     life of torture with your bruises
with a mere touch of fevered sweat
      your life will fall

should nothing be,
        because you are hauntingly beautiful
familiar ghostly paste upon the stains
      your scream gives a new meaning to fright
and it all seems hopeless

you laugh,
        because you are hauntingly beautiful
but your life shall never be the same

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-11-08 10:50 AM

Riiiiiiiiiiileeeeeyyyyyyyyy

eeek....is all I have to say

What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall?
All walls are great, if the roof doesn't fall.
-yorke/bjork

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

2 posted 2003-11-08 12:15 PM

liz- what is that? good bad, what? lol!!!! my nails are purty...they is silver and black!! muhaha! lol...hyper stuff...but seriously what does that mean?
*ri*

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-11-08 01:50 PM

good...it is good riley.

just my DDD's acting up

I'm disfunctional, demented and disturbed

What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall?
All walls are great, if the roof doesn't fall.
-yorke/bjork

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

4 posted 2003-11-08 03:37 PM

liz i think i am that too....lol....or i could be ded, disfuntional and emotionally disturbed...lol

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2004-07-08 12:13 PM

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