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Riley
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in the pouring rain


0 posted 11-07-2003 10:48 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Riley


** hey, wrote this about a year ago, revised it and thought i would post it again and see what you guys thought..its not that good so yea**
laugh,
       because you are hauntingly beautiful
imperfected in all your features
      your smile is senescent
looking past the eyes of a candle
      only to find the fire of a thought
you always [ seem ] to break the mold
       their core

you know,
        you are hauntingly beautiful
wispy, heat bound hair, frames, a brail eye
    one touch,
                 and your coal black skin turns to a late summer snow
                            all this hidden,
behind piercingly dull gray eyes that kill

cry,
        because you are hauntingly beautiful
     a droplet holds a thousand pieces of blood
the mirror cannot bring seven years, but a
     life of torture with your bruises
with a mere touch of fevered sweat
      your life will fall


should nothing be,
        because you are hauntingly beautiful
familiar ghostly paste upon the stains
      your scream gives a new meaning to fright
and it all seems hopeless

you laugh,
        because you are hauntingly beautiful
but your life shall never be the same
      
        

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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1 posted 11-08-2003 10:50 AM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

Riiiiiiiiiiileeeeeyyyyyyyyy

eeek....is all I have to say

What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall?
All walls are great, if the roof doesn't fall.
-yorke/bjork

Riley
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2 posted 11-08-2003 12:15 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

liz- what is that? good bad, what? lol!!!! my nails are purty...they is silver and black!! muhaha! lol...hyper stuff...but seriously what does that mean?
*ri*

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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3 posted 11-08-2003 01:50 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

good...it is good riley.

just my DDD's acting up

I'm disfunctional, demented and disturbed

What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall?
All walls are great, if the roof doesn't fall.
-yorke/bjork

Riley
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4 posted 11-08-2003 03:37 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

liz i think i am that too....lol....or i could be ded, disfuntional and emotionally disturbed...lol

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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