Congratulations on discovering painful poetry. First of all, I think it's cute that you're considering someone else innocent. It's like a tall midget calling a shorter midget "shorty." I'm kidding, don't rip into me for that one. But really, you've got a lot of experience to go yet, your innocence still seems fresh enough that it lends to your imagination and enhances your poetry...
There are some familiar images in this poem, blood and mirrors... I'd encourage you to mix it up a bit. Although, on the other hand, I like how vivid you can be in the artificial world without stepping out into nature...
It's cool, and brings a lot to your style... glad to have read more by you. Keep up the poetry, darling.
Faith is a fine invention
When gentlemen can see
But microscopes are prudent
In an emergency.