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multi colored love ( short )

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Riley
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in the pouring rain


0 posted 10-19-2003 01:12 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Riley


crystal tears have stained a streak
in the face you see before
eyes shaking so with invisions of
sweet rains waterfall is so close
did you forget your own essence
at home lying on the floor
tarnished with the blood gone cold
it was then on this breezy summer night
you loved me true

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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1 posted 10-19-2003 08:49 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Such bittersweet introspection, Riley - well penned, m'friend...
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2 posted 10-19-2003 08:59 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

thanks for replyin nan. ahhh life is good....my life is turning for the better!

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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Glad to hear life is good.  Nice work with the short poem, it's a good way to make sure you can check the box next to "subtle" on your writing checklist.  The ending works nice, it's one of the things I love about your poetry, how you paint obscurity and then caption it with one closing line.

Thank you for sharing this with us, Ri... and thank you for never giving up on poetry.  

Much love
Brian

Faith is a fine invention
When gentlemen can see
But microscopes are prudent
In an emergency.
~~~Emily Dickinson

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4 posted 10-20-2003 05:01 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

This, Riley, is just totally lovely.
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5 posted 10-20-2003 06:25 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

lp...riley the princess who depends on poetry give up! HA! you make me laugh dear sir. i shall never give up. as for the comments..thank ya kindly!

serenity....thank you for such a kind comment...glad you enjoyed


*love**
ri

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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6 posted 10-21-2003 07:46 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

this is awsome ri

What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall?
All walls are great, if the roof doesn't fall.
-yorke/bjork

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liz- thanks a lot...:-)

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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8 posted 09-29-2006 05:59 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

"multi colored love ( short ) "

Ain't it the doggone truth......

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