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gemjop
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0 posted 10-17-2003 08:51 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for gemjop


This hour shakes
as if it were to crack

An afterthought
of goodbye

Scatter do the sweeter things
like creatures caught in light

When the burden of wait looms
hungry over such patient shoulders

Writing with guides
straightening the lines

Memory rebellious askew

I give in to the gravity of word
falling from skull to paper

This hour should be over
in unimaginable future



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1 posted 10-18-2003 02:43 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allysa

Gem.. wow.  This is... this is something great.

An afterthought
of goodbye


That part just stuck with me... wow.  I'm struggling with words today.. too much coffee.
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2 posted 10-18-2003 09:23 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

hey gem.

this is awsome. awe-some. phhlt. can't think much else to say

What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall?
All walls are great, if the roof doesn't fall.
-yorke/bjork

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3 posted 06-07-2004 05:30 PM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

"Scatter do the sweeter things
like creatures caught in light"

- This is wonderful writing, succinct yet beautiful, thanks for sharing.

Andrew

 
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