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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....

0 posted 2003-10-03 02:38 PM


Oh how I love you!
Soft, dimpled skin
Glowing, the freshness of youth
Bursting in to fullness of maturity.
I long to savour the contours of your interior,
Desire to tease your juices with my tongue,
Reaching ever deeper into the depths of your perfection.
I run my fingers over your curves,
Searching to break into you,
Heart pounding in uncontrollable hunger.
I love you
Oranges!!


"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

[This message has been edited by ESP (10-03-2003 02:38 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-10-14 03:56 PM


YES! This is GREAT! HEHEHE.. it's so cute, it's so misleading, I actually laughed out loud when I got to the end!

Oh, make me Thine forever
And should I fainting be
Lord, let me never ever
Outlive my love for Thee

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2 posted 2003-10-17 12:18 PM


Oranges rock! Yummy.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

ESP
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3 posted 2003-10-17 04:33 PM


Thank u both for replying, much appreciated xxxxx

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

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4 posted 2003-10-20 12:43 PM


Ahaha... I was about to say this belongs in Mature Content, but I guess not.  We've all gotten sticky fingers from oranges before.  

Great poetry, ESP... glad to see you posting in here again.  

Parasite

Faith is a fine invention
When gentlemen can see
But microscopes are prudent
In an emergency.
~~~Emily Dickinson

ESP
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5 posted 2003-10-21 04:50 PM


Thank you Parasite. This one was based on an exercise we did in Creative Writing class earlier this term. I had fun writing it so I'm glad people are enjoying it in here Liz x

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

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