How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Sanctuary
 Poetic Haven
 Unconventional Love Story.....
 1 2 3 4 5
Follow us on Facebook

 Moderated by: Poet deVine, Martie   (Admins )

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Unconventional Love Story.....

 Post A Reply Post New Topic   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
ESP
Member Elite
since 01-25-2000
Posts 2574
Floating gently on a cloud....


0 posted 10-03-2003 02:38 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ESP

Oh how I love you!
Soft, dimpled skin
Glowing, the freshness of youth
Bursting in to fullness of maturity.
I long to savour the contours of your interior,
Desire to tease your juices with my tongue,
Reaching ever deeper into the depths of your perfection.
I run my fingers over your curves,
Searching to break into you,
Heart pounding in uncontrollable hunger.
I love you
Oranges!!


"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

[This message has been edited by ESP (10-03-2003 02:38 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 ESP - All Rights Reserved
LoveBug
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 01-08-2000
Posts 5015


1 posted 10-14-2003 03:56 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

YES! This is GREAT! HEHEHE.. it's so cute, it's so misleading, I actually laughed out loud when I got to the end!

Oh, make me Thine forever
And should I fainting be
Lord, let me never ever
Outlive my love for Thee

skyshine
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 02-07-2002
Posts 3337
Beneath the northern stars


2 posted 10-17-2003 12:18 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

Oranges rock! Yummy.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

ESP
Member Elite
since 01-25-2000
Posts 2574
Floating gently on a cloud....


3 posted 10-17-2003 04:33 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thank u both for replying, much appreciated xxxxx

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

Local Parasite
Deputy Moderator 10 Tours
Member Elite
since 11-05-2001
Posts 2929
Transylconia, Winnipeg


4 posted 10-20-2003 12:43 PM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

Ahaha... I was about to say this belongs in Mature Content, but I guess not.  We've all gotten sticky fingers from oranges before.  

Great poetry, ESP... glad to see you posting in here again.  

Parasite

Faith is a fine invention
When gentlemen can see
But microscopes are prudent
In an emergency.
~~~Emily Dickinson

ESP
Member Elite
since 01-25-2000
Posts 2574
Floating gently on a cloud....


5 posted 10-21-2003 04:50 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thank you Parasite. This one was based on an exercise we did in Creative Writing class earlier this term. I had fun writing it so I'm glad people are enjoying it in here Liz x

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

 
 Post A Reply Post New Topic   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Sanctuary >> Poetic Haven >> Unconventional Love Story..... Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors