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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden


0 posted 10-01-2003 03:13 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Allysa

She stares into your soul.

Mirror image of hers,
she finds a home
inside your deepest
darkest desires,
hiding she burrows into you,
and two become one.

As long as you let her
she will remain entraped forever.

Crazy crystaline structure
promises her security,
she reaches out to touch
what is not hers.

So familiar, she wants
to call  you home.

If you would only let her.

Fall away with her
where time does not exist
it is irrelevent
you've got nowhere else to be
but here.

She could be your world
stand still, stop time
scratch the surface of
everything.

You are the same.

Let her have it.
Allow her to grasp it
to clutch it, to love it.

Allow her to touch you.
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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space


1 posted 10-02-2003 08:24 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

really feel the longing in this...ow
Allysa
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2 posted 10-03-2003 02:12 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allysa

i guess that means that you felt what I felt when I wrote this... and am still feeling...

grr... just out of my reach.
 
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