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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2003-09-30 06:49 PM

She went about it
like love itself,
holding deep, mature tastes
that aged in her eyes.

When she was ready to let go,
she'd breathe without malice,
soft silky smoke
slipping to the ceiling.

Sometimes she'd be at it
until the lights went out,
and shadows traced the walls
in headlights and fences.

Together, falling down
among evening patterns.
I would kiss her in the garden
if she had one.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-10-01 03:43 PM

Again, I'm amazed.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

2 posted 2003-10-01 04:01 PM

was waiting for you to post a new one

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2003-10-01 04:24 PM

Come on you two, get organized. Who's going to be the founder of the Mikey Fan Club -- and who the president?

Heh.

Thanks for the praise...

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