Interesting.. it seems it's been too long since we've spoken. I like the lines :
Be there no will within the souls of men
To walk with Reason through the gorge of Hell?
Because, to me, it just seems to prove how insufficiant reason is.. I mean, if you believed totally in reason, why even mention it and Hell in the same sentence? I don't know, it seemed like a big paradox there to me, but maybe it's just me. It usually is. I like the conclusion too :
I've marked and tagged each stone upon my query,
But Time outflanks me, and my steps grow weary.
That even for all your reasoning and intelligence, you haven't found what you're looking for.. am I right?
Oh, make me Thine forever
And should I fainting be
Lord, let me never ever
Outlive my love for Thee