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Will you remember
the last note played
as it dies?

Will it hold
its final gloaming
in your view?

Will it shade out
new notes made
in your mind?

Will you recall
its grace and sprawl,
its silken weight?

How it spindled down,
apart,
upon sine waves?
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1 posted 09-24-2003 04:06 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

I love the one's that question...
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some resonate forever
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3 posted 09-25-2003 11:49 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Thank you both. I lopped off the final verse, so it would have this incomplete, unsettled feeling about it.
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I've held those moments...

thank you, Mike.
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mike, you already know that you're wonderful..

wonderous write mr. squirrel.
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love you squirrely one....it does linger, after you have finished reading...nicely done

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7 posted 09-28-2003 02:09 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

hhhmmmmmmmmm. .. drools. I am in a quite insane mood today.

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
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Mike- masterfully done... as always.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

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thx all
 
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