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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2003-09-20 11:42 PM

something
in
the pit
of my
stomach
eyelids
grow
disturbed
my
thoughts
grow wary
afraid
of
what
tomorrow
might hold
faith
has
jumped
out the window
without
a parachute
words
of
comfort
can't
seem
to calm
down
the
regurgitation
of
thoughts
funny...
i
thought
i
had
forgotten
how to
worry
but
seems
like
it hasn't
forgotten
me...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-09-21 12:05 PM

nope it never forgets

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2003-09-21 01:56 AM

Have you been having sex with my husband?

*chuckle*?

(I do apologize. I'm no longer sure if I have lapses of insanity, or momentary illusions of circumspect.)

I enjoyed this alot lady.

I just have a different slant on interpretation at times.

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (09-21-2003 02:37 AM).]

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

3 posted 2003-09-24 10:53 PM

I love the way you wrote that, all stretched out.. It has quite some impact!

Bless your cotten sockies, you poetic maniacs. ^_^

Love - Lynne

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