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Sunshine
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0 posted 09-19-2003 10:50 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine



The lines
are becoming finer

the scarred ones
on my hands

certainly,
those around
the eyes

absolutely
the ones that
are crossed…

so
much
finer…

those defining
my hands,
or eyes…

they

won’t break.


© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-19-2003 11:04 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

And some very FINE lines they are, my dear poet. Each of them is a gift.
I want less gifts!
bsquirrel
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2 posted 09-19-2003 12:50 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Great to see you in here, Karilea. Those lines are almost a poetry of the skin.
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3 posted 09-23-2003 02:26 AM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

Every line is just a landmark of experience, of living wisdom and a legacy in process.  It's very much something for you to be proud of, and I'm glad you've written it so.

Beautiful poetry, mom.  Sorry I haven't been reading you so much, school is real time-consuming.  

Read you again soon,
Brian

Faith is a fine invention
When gentlemen can see
But microscopes are prudent
In an emergency.
~~~Emily Dickinson

littlewing
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4 posted 09-24-2003 12:43 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

and I sit here and wish I only
had one inch of wisdom which resides in such line . . .
*smile*
xxoo
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