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The trail of smoke

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2003-09-18 03:34 PM

Just one more touch,
in place.

Your image -- ice-
spun lace.

Cinder eyes
in warming glow,

inhaled,
exhaled
in one blow.

The trail of smoke
a distant scent.

It travails, breaks,
upon one spent.

I tremble, touch,
to taste the feel

of one last kiss
before we heal.

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

1 posted 2003-09-18 03:39 PM

*licks her lips* delicious ache...yeah I know I'm weird...just have me thinking..sorry

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-09-18 11:45 PM

One of the very few people I know that see's how poetic smoking can be...heh

it can!
damnit.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2003-09-19 12:42 PM

Fun fact: I actually smoke quite infrequently. But the image ... is poetry.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-09-19 03:03 AM

Agreed

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