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Just one more touch,
in place.

Your image -- ice-
spun lace.

Cinder eyes
in warming glow,

inhaled,
exhaled
in one blow.

The trail of smoke
a distant scent.

It travails, breaks,
upon one spent.

I tremble, touch,
to taste the feel

of one last kiss
before we heal.
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*licks her lips* delicious ache...yeah I know I'm weird...just have me thinking..sorry

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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One of the very few people I know that see's how poetic smoking can be...heh

it can!
damnit.
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Fun fact: I actually smoke quite infrequently. But the image ... is poetry.
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Agreed
 
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