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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 09-18-2003 02:45 PM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ceinwyn



plaster
your words
all over
my bathroom stall soul
grind
deep
down
within
my
crushed velvet thoughts
leave
your sweaty
imprints
upon my
bubble gum tongue
go ahead...
you know
you want to
you know
it's
the only place
you
have
total
control
go on...
leave
your sweaty
imprints
grind
deep
down
within
my
crushed velvet thoughts..



If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-18-2003 02:51 PM).]

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1 posted 09-18-2003 03:38 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Intense!
Skyfire
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2 posted 09-18-2003 04:21 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

*speechless*

Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously
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littlewing
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3 posted 09-18-2003 09:03 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Kristen . . . this is hmm mmm yep
brilliant . . .  mannnnn
xxoo
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4 posted 09-19-2003 02:37 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allysa

Wow..

Also must add that I enjoy your critique message too..
 
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