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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2003-09-15 11:00 PM

Jupiter collapsing
within my veins
Caffeine
holds no
sympathy
I'm afraid
my thoughts
are up
again
tonight
my emotions
kiss & tell
another
midnight renedevous
with Orion's belt
tarot cards
spread
in disarray
High Priestess
flirting
with
a
solitary
red votive
burning
on my nightstand
my innocence
lost
somewhere
within
her
eyes
my feelings
lost
somewhere
within
that flame
my
aura
lost
somewhere
within
your
name...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-15-2003 11:11 PM).]

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2003-09-16 01:34 PM

I've had nights like that, minus the cards. Great little peek here, Kris.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (09-16-2003 01:34 PM).]

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

2 posted 2003-09-16 05:48 PM

Jupiter collapsing
within my veins
Caffeine
holds no
sympathy
I'm afraid
my thoughts
are up
again
tonight
woooooo love this. it does become the thoughts that are awake, and not your body, like an out of body experience.

nice one kris.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-09-16 09:11 PM

my feelings
lost
somewhere
within
that flame
my
aura
lost
somewhere
within
your
name...

l@ve the ending..all of it but just how it all funneled into this

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-09-17 01:52 PM

God Good this is a masterpiece, m'lady
flowing from that candle right onto my desk . . .
Beautiful Kris
xxoo

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2003-09-17 07:38 PM

a
solitary
red votive
burning
on my nightstand
my innocence
lost
somewhere
within
her
eyes
my feelings
lost
somewhere
within
that flame
===================

oh good grief...you just wrote a moth anthem...
and its obvious to me, Im not gonna be able to read these awesome poems with out bawling...*s*
very very cool write Poetess Kris...
love the mix of cards, candles and emotions.

"If you see lonely, clear skies turning stormy ...
Lightning strikes and all you see is blue ... this is me missing you"

JH

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-09-18 08:08 PM

Excellent....

for several reasons.

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

7 posted 2003-09-18 08:23 PM

guys I can't stress this enough you all are tooooo kind to me!! thank you

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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