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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 09-15-2003 11:00 PM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ceinwyn



Jupiter collapsing
within my veins
Caffeine
holds no
sympathy
I'm afraid
my thoughts
are up
again
tonight
my emotions
kiss & tell
another
midnight renedevous
with Orion's belt
tarot cards
spread
in disarray
High Priestess
flirting
with
a
solitary
red votive
burning
on my nightstand
my innocence
lost
somewhere
within
her
eyes
my feelings
lost
somewhere
within
that flame
my
aura
lost
somewhere
within
your
name...


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-15-2003 11:11 PM).]

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bsquirrel
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1 posted 09-16-2003 01:34 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

I've had nights like that, minus the cards. Great little peek here, Kris.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (09-16-2003 01:34 PM).]

gemjop
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Jupiter collapsing
within my veins
Caffeine
holds no
sympathy
I'm afraid
my thoughts
are up
again
tonight
woooooo love this. it does become the thoughts that are awake, and not your body, like an out of body experience.

nice one kris.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Aenimal
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since 11-18-2002
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the ass-end of space


3 posted 09-16-2003 09:11 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

my feelings
lost
somewhere
within
that flame
my
aura
lost
somewhere
within
your
name...

l@ve the ending..all of it but just how it all funneled into this
littlewing
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since 03-02-2003
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4 posted 09-17-2003 01:52 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

God Good this is a masterpiece, m'lady
flowing from that candle right onto my desk . . .
Beautiful Kris
xxoo
Janet Marie
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5 posted 09-17-2003 07:38 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

a
solitary
red votive
burning
on my nightstand
my innocence
lost
somewhere
within
her
eyes
my feelings
lost
somewhere
within
that flame

===================

oh good grief...you just wrote a moth anthem...
and its obvious to me, Im not gonna be able to read these awesome poems with out bawling...*s*
very very cool write Poetess Kris...
love the mix of cards, candles and emotions.

"If you see lonely, clear skies turning stormy ...
Lightning strikes and all you see is blue ... this is me missing you"

JH

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


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Excellent....

for several reasons.
Ceinwyn
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since 07-09-2000
Posts 2238
Baltimore, MD


7 posted 09-18-2003 08:23 PM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ceinwyn

guys I can't stress this enough you all are tooooo kind to me!! thank you

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

 
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