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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 09-13-2003 04:49 PM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ceinwyn

make love to my mind
crawl inside
darkness beckons
cobweb binds, my hands and mouth
come be my muse
entrap me
wrap me
with obtuse, notions
diamonds
glittering snow
follow me darling
we'll be late for the show
I have paid your fare
no need for excuse
just fall into my mind
let me be your muse



If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.


[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-13-2003 05:03 PM).]

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Duncan
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1 posted 09-13-2003 05:26 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

Damn, and I just screened in the porch.  
Excellent write btw....
littlewing
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2 posted 09-13-2003 09:48 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Oh my  . . .
whoever inspired this
is one lucky man . . .
beautiful Kris truly
just oooh I adore this I do
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (09-13-2003 09:52 PM).]

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3 posted 09-13-2003 10:55 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

this is another masterpiece

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
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littlewing
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4 posted 09-15-2003 09:34 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

ohh man this needs to breathe  . . .
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5 posted 09-15-2003 06:02 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Yes please...
Ceinwyn
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6 posted 09-15-2003 07:52 PM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ceinwyn



gawd guys....you're too sweet...I'm happy now

Sue...KISSEEEEYYY FACE I'm sucha girl tonight..sorry second wind kicking in..that's what I get for working overtime

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Ceinwyn
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7 posted 09-16-2003 06:06 PM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ceinwyn



    


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.


[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-16-2003 09:35 PM).]

 
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