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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-09-12 05:33 AM


I will not
allow you
to love me
without grace.

You mere
creature,
you've been boundless here.

And I
have no quarrel..
with leaving you
that way.


© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-09-12 09:00 AM


interesting piece..the title a bit disturbing..but then the feeling you describe are painful..defiant..and laced with a tinge of futile..

I enjoyed.

Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
2 posted 2003-09-12 02:29 PM


Wow.
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3 posted 2003-09-12 03:32 PM


Mmm.
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