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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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I follow two creatures in the night wolf wants To tear me to pieces I’d rather grow claws and draw jagged metal These machines can’t crash if they never start. I’ve stained everything around me silver, the blood of mercury takes flight and everything comes to life at night “doctor? I think this one’s stupid.” I think I can walk through this window and stay safe I repeat- none of us are… Sorry- I guess I can’t compute? I wasn’t taught those words or what to say reponse- someone tell me how to speak. I think I’m going to have a meltdown And…well… I’ve been known to talk to photographs and the occasional raincloud though lightning pulls right through me sends a shock straight to my... oh...I forgot tinman, I know how it feels but none of us are safe… Symbiosis tells me to wait it out. And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" -Tool [This message has been edited by Wind (09-11-2003 10:16 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Liz, amazing writing, as they all are but this reminded me of societal breakdown, moreso of the human spirit . . . you see quite well missy xxoo |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gah.. this is.. amazing.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
And…well… I’ve been known to talk to photographs and the occasional raincloud though lightning pulls right through me sends a shock straight to my... oh...I forgot tinman, I know how it feels but none of us are safe… Symbiosis tells me to wait it out. you know... sure you know... ((hugs)) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Excellent! The LIV Bugs first single! |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
lol..thank you guys. And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 thats a good thing means I'm speechless...lolIf at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
liz, amazing poem here, just amazing...i love it! rilllley * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Mikeys right, it did read like a song. The liv bugs are gonna be massiiiiiive! This, by the way, is perhaps my favourite ever of yours, yes it is. so many clever lines i wish i'd written. abstract and perfect! Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
lol...it's what happens when ya watch the wizard of oz and...what did I do after that? ohh..something about a robot or something... and Riley...where the heck were ya girl? I'll hurt you if you run off again And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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