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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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You know... I've found myself here many times before drinking from your glass licking my lips always thirsty for more of your love laced guidance and tolerance yes... you know... all too well you can taste the pain cry my tears YES I used to feel you right beside me in my times of uncertainity but.... I can't see you... have you forsaken me?... did you grow tired of me always crying out your name only to run away in fear of rejection and being abandoned... I'm scared my spirit parched... I'm so thirsty how much longer will my soul experience this drought... I'm reaching... I'm bleeding... I'm thirsty... for your love... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
This is lovely. thirst...is worse than hunger. And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris . . . just listen , it will come This is beautiful in it's stark spirituality . . . xxoo |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done... it trips the page and the readers mind as if a lament..and plea..for water to touch parched lips after far too long denied... enjoyed... a great deal..I enjoyed |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
An exquisite ouch. See what I'll be up to on Saturday: www.bubastis.com/funeral |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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