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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 09-11-2003 08:01 PM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ceinwyn


You know...
I've found myself here
many
times before
drinking from your glass
licking my lips
always
thirsty for more
of your love laced
guidance
and tolerance

yes...
you know...
all too well
you can
taste the pain
cry my tears

YES
I used to feel
you right beside me
in my times
of uncertainity
but....
I can't
see you...

have you forsaken me?...

did you
grow tired of
me always crying
out your name
only to run away
in fear
of rejection
and being abandoned...

I'm scared
my spirit
parched...

I'm so
thirsty
how much
longer
will
my
soul
experience
this drought...

I'm reaching...
I'm bleeding...
I'm thirsty...

for your love...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2003 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Wind
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1 posted 09-11-2003 09:40 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

This is lovely. thirst...is worse than hunger.

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

littlewing
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2 posted 09-12-2003 02:22 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Kris . . . just listen , it will come
This is beautiful in it's stark spirituality
. . .
xxoo
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3 posted 09-12-2003 09:59 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

very nicely done... it trips the page and the readers mind as if a lament..and plea..for water to touch parched lips after far too long denied...

enjoyed... a great deal..I enjoyed
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4 posted 09-12-2003 03:53 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

An exquisite ouch.

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Ceinwyn
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5 posted 09-13-2003 12:34 AM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ceinwyn

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

 
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