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Winter thoughts while watching her dance

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Smoking deep and lazily,
I notice that she dances, floats
the same as the first snow of winter.

One bright crystal spinning down
through the dark, a moth in lights,
down to touch the waiting street.

Oh, the fog rises from fields,
the trees are cut-outs, gray signposts
lifting toward the remnant sun.

Their covered limbs in arrayed ice,
dripping frozen in remains.
Those trees lay straight into the rays

as she passes, dancing down.
Wanton melt is what she wants,
and as she touches down, receives.

She takes the ciggy from my hand,
draws a deep and playful taste,
and through her eyes, I know she knows.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (09-10-2003 03:44 PM).]

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1 posted 09-11-2003 03:19 AM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

How do I do that little emoticon...
awh, screw it.
This is awesome..
I'm working on that code for you, brother.
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"One bright crystal spinning down
through the dark, a moth in lights,
down to touch the waiting street.

Oh, the fog rises from fields,
the trees are cut-outs, gray signposts
lifting toward the remnant sun.

Their covered limbs in arrayed ice,
dripping frozen in remains.
Those trees lay straight into the rays"

Just beautiful, Mikey.  I always enjoy reading you.
Hugs,
~Vicky

If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

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Thank you both. And much appreciated on anything you can offer code-wise, Kaoru.
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4 posted 09-11-2003 09:39 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

I wanted to say this earlier but..I get those winter thoughts too. its beautiful. and..um. I forgive ya

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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5 posted 09-12-2003 02:23 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Mikey . . .
she seems like a snowflake to me . . .
beautiful, as always
xxoo
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6 posted 09-12-2003 03:31 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Danke.
 
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