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In My Skin

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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden


0 posted 09-08-2003 03:15 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Allysa

She has taken to coloring her hands again.

Missing the time when she used to
color in between the lines.

They have all faded away.

you are in my skin

She's trying to find a way out again.

Burrowing blindly has left her
craving some reconstruction.

Give her lines back to her.

I will take back what you stole.

She has no fingerprints.

Her identity has disappeared
with her memory, they went for a stroll.

She needs some redirection.

i need you out of my skin
perhaps I'll finish this later

[This message has been edited by Allysa (09-08-2003 09:34 PM).]

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow


1 posted 09-08-2003 03:26 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Love this, great imagery.. powerful lines..
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2 posted 09-08-2003 06:25 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

Love the twists in this, and love the thoughts. it makes me feel anxiety, but i like it. Does that make sense?

keeping it.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Ceinwyn
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3 posted 09-12-2003 08:00 PM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ceinwyn

yeah I'm pretty much with gem on this one

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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4 posted 09-16-2003 01:20 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

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