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Gaunt, without sense

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gemjop
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0 posted 09-06-2003 09:54 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for gemjop

Cramming
from difficult corner
to flexible edge

it never breaks
forced
looks uncomfortable

why wear silence
so well
when it doesn't fit skin

how could it
since it became the air

tickling the truth out of me

slowly


mistaking the identity
of your lack of words

romanticising
I make your reasons beautiful
when they

are stark
and pale

gaunt
without
sense
.
.
.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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littlewing
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1 posted 09-07-2003 10:08 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

I know, like a hollow pit in your tummy
always beautiful writing gem
xxoo
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2 posted 09-07-2003 01:04 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

"why wear silence
so well
when it doesn't fit skin

how could it
since it became the air"

Wow, Gem.. this is really awesome. I dig it.
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3 posted 09-07-2003 03:15 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

but you do make sense. and it is beautiful sense

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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4 posted 09-08-2003 11:59 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

That's always the 1,000-pound question, isn't it?
 
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