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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-09-06 09:54 PM


Cramming
from difficult corner
to flexible edge

it never breaks
forced
looks uncomfortable

why wear silence
so well
when it doesn't fit skin

how could it
since it became the air

tickling the truth out of me

slowly


mistaking the identity
of your lack of words

romanticising
I make your reasons beautiful
when they

are stark
and pale

gaunt
without
sense
.
.
.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-09-07 10:08 AM


I know, like a hollow pit in your tummy
always beautiful writing gem
xxoo

Kaoru
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Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2003-09-07 01:04 PM


"why wear silence
so well
when it doesn't fit skin

how could it
since it became the air"

Wow, Gem.. this is really awesome. I dig it.

Wind
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since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-09-07 03:15 PM


but you do make sense. and it is beautiful sense

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

bsquirrel
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4 posted 2003-09-08 11:59 AM


That's always the 1,000-pound question, isn't it?
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