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I don't want to write about you anymore..

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Kaoru
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0 posted 09-05-2003 12:23 AM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kaoru

You say you fear thunder..
i say
it's
merely noise.


i should
not
be afraid
of you.

i shouldn't
cower,
I promise to
welcome
lonliness..

i'm chasing
the wind..
it's a dusty day.
Teary eyed, rosey cheeks..
i accepted
the fact that
it
wouldn't be warm
again..

giving away my glory
i can feel
you watching me..

reminding
me of
the arms
i'd claimed, oh,
i missed you for awhile but..

lightning
is far
worse..


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littlewing
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1 posted 09-05-2003 03:48 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

mere noise indeed . . .

you write with grace, Meg
and this I feeeeeel the bittersweet
kind of like copper . . .
Beautiful writing
xxoo
Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 09-05-2003 10:21 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

"reminding
me of
the arms
i'd claimed, oh,
i missed you for awhile but..

lightning
is far
worse.."

Powerful...as usual..

Love the new pic!

Susan
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3 posted 09-05-2003 12:21 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

An ouch, an aww and an mmm.

Pretty much runs the gamut.
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space


4 posted 09-06-2003 03:30 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

what the squirrely one said..
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5 posted 09-06-2003 07:40 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

I don't speak baffled gibberish so I couldn't tell you what the others said, but I am in awe of this

insanity is not a crime

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6 posted 09-06-2003 08:13 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

Ditto, what they said, and,i dont want to write about him anymore.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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7 posted 09-07-2003 02:37 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allysa

I like.  The opening line really drew me into this and you kept me throughout it.  Congratulations on wonderfulness.

[This message has been edited by Allysa (09-08-2003 02:38 PM).]

 
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