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She left bootprints in the snow.
Overnight they put on ice.
Smooth and shallow imprints.
I watched them taste the sun.

I still can see her stride,
left graphed out in the white,
the smooth path of her travel.
The surety of her way.
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1 posted 09-04-2003 01:58 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

You are addictive!!

I truly am in awe of your words.

bah. speechless.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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2 posted 09-04-2003 07:03 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Thanks, gem. I appreciate that.
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3 posted 09-04-2003 09:40 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

addictive..yes, that would be a good word for it

insanity is not a crime

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God, this is a beautiful line Mikey

I watched them taste the sun.

*smiling*
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5 posted 09-05-2003 09:32 PM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ceinwyn

addictive kinda like chocolate but better..hey I coulda said something else

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-05-2003 09:33 PM).]

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A bijou, squirrel dude.
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I appreciate that, Ed.
 
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