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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2003-09-04 12:27 PM



She left bootprints in the snow.
Overnight they put on ice.
Smooth and shallow imprints.
I watched them taste the sun.

I still can see her stride,
left graphed out in the white,
the smooth path of her travel.
The surety of her way.

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gemjop
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1 posted 2003-09-04 01:58 PM


You are addictive!!

I truly am in awe of your words.

bah. speechless.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2003-09-04 07:03 PM


Thanks, gem. I appreciate that.
Wind
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3 posted 2003-09-04 09:40 PM


addictive..yes, that would be a good word for it

insanity is not a crime

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-09-05 04:05 AM


God, this is a beautiful line Mikey

I watched them taste the sun.

*smiling*
xxoo

Ceinwyn
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5 posted 2003-09-05 09:32 PM


addictive kinda like chocolate but better..hey I coulda said something else

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-05-2003 09:33 PM).]

wranx
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6 posted 2003-09-08 11:11 PM


A bijou, squirrel dude.
bsquirrel
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7 posted 2003-09-09 02:31 PM


I appreciate that, Ed.
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