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Have A Care ( Wranx and Littlewing)

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littlewing
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0 posted 09-03-2003 06:40 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for littlewing


Have a care woman
for I intend to make you mine
to bring us together

Be you careful
that I don't smother you
in this, my pursuit of you

Stay the course
that you've set for yourself
make me, but an addition

An adjunct
to what you already have
to fortify your life

A charm
to dangle from your heart
and warm your spirit

Have a care woman
for I intend to win you
to love you.....unending


You come
upon the cool night breeze
caressing my face
wisp of wind
your kiss
my lips . . .

Within this visit
the night prowl
your presence,
consumes my mouth
my soul, my breath
becomes your own

it always was

and I sigh
and smile
fingers firmly wrapped
holding the locket upon my neck
placed there by love  
and longing

I turn
and there you are, my love
Arms to hold me
growling
winning me

all over again


© Copyright 2003 Sue Eckam - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 09-03-2003 08:48 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

An absolutely beautiful collaboration Ed and Sue.

fantastic!

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

KristieSue
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2 posted 09-03-2003 10:14 AM       View Profile for KristieSue   Email KristieSue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit KristieSue's Home Page   View IP for KristieSue

I'd love to be given such a threat :-)

Awesome job!

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

Aenimal
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3 posted 09-03-2003 09:09 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

you two always work so well, very nice
Midnitesun
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4 posted 09-03-2003 09:43 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Hmm, think I heard some delightful growling in this one.
Love this dynamic pairing.
vlraynes
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5 posted 09-03-2003 11:35 PM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes


Sigh...I'd like some of that...*smile*

This is truly beautiful...on multiple levels.

Smiling at you two...

"Deep inside this armor, the warrior is a child."
~Twila Paris

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Saluting with misty eyes


6 posted 09-03-2003 11:49 PM       View Profile for Ringo   Email Ringo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ringo

This is yet another phenominal write from a pair of phenominal writers...

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

wranx
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7 posted 09-04-2003 12:01 AM       View Profile for wranx   Email wranx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wranx

I don't think that I've told you how very much your words have added to this...

Started as just a thought, you added...life.



Have a care...

[This message has been edited by wranx (09-04-2003 12:03 AM).]

timothysangel1973
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8 posted 09-04-2003 08:20 AM       View Profile for timothysangel1973   Email timothysangel1973   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit timothysangel1973's Home Page   View IP for timothysangel1973

Hey you two...this is wonderful!  Your styles, and your thoughts seemed to have meshed together and formed a masterpiece!

Luvs Ya

Tima
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9 posted 09-04-2003 09:42 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

a very smart person said that you cannot have rock without rythem. and you have it all

that person was me

insanity is not a crime

littlewing
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10 posted 09-05-2003 03:44 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Thank you Maree . . . so very much

Kristie, yes, lovely it is . . .
thank you

Thank you Raph, that meant a lot to me

Kacy, cover your ears!  *smile*
thank you

Thank you Vicky . . . smiling right back

Brad, you are so sweet . . . always have the perfect words . . . *smile*
thank you

Ed sweety, yes, a thought - your thought to heart to pen to mine . . . I thank you for this and so much more . . .
Have a Care . . . yes, I sure will

Tima . . . thank you so much
that really made me smile

Liz, and as I have always said, you are far beyond your years . . . thank you  

Thanks guys . . .
What started as a sentiment, turned into
this . . . Ed?  

[This message has been edited by littlewing (09-05-2003 03:45 AM).]

wranx
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11 posted 09-05-2003 09:33 AM       View Profile for wranx   Email wranx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wranx

A thought, a sentiment...
Words that convey something disolute, but in this new revelation they become resolute.

And Susie?
Dreamer@
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12 posted 09-06-2003 12:44 PM       View Profile for Dreamer@   Email Dreamer@   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dreamer@

Smile


Dreamer

Life is for mee to be !

Midnitesun
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13 posted 09-06-2003 02:34 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Hmm, don't you think this one belongs on everyone's recommended reading list?





[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (09-06-2003 02:36 PM).]

gemjop
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14 posted 09-06-2003 08:23 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

EEEEEE i missed this one.A pleasure to read you both.

a keeper.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

 
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