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gemjop
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0 posted 09-01-2003 04:43 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for gemjop


Electric lights

I

could leave out letters
and let you fill the words

flash battery
show me where you drive

I

deserve more
than torch help by limp arm

tired of shining me the way
drop it then

intuition never helps me to forget
does she?

reliable old fool
never believe what she screams in my face

I

should not worry
when I have more to know.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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1 posted 09-01-2003 09:06 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

I know the peices fit...

whatever. yeah..but poking around in the dark is fun too. oh gem..I'd put it in the library, but you are already in there yourself so..you know.

insanity is not a crime

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow


2 posted 09-02-2003 01:39 AM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

dot to dot the i's..

the first line hooked me on.

great, gem, you're just great.

i dig it.
littlewing
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3 posted 09-03-2003 11:04 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

You sure do, Lady deserve more than this:

I

deserve more
than torch help by limp arm


and instantly what started playing
in my head but
ELO "Don't Bring Me Down"
you must listen, if only once
beautiful pen there gemma
xxoo
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4 posted 09-03-2003 03:59 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

I love these lights.
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space


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amazing gem
 
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