»
Sanctuary
»
Poetic Haven
»
jaded
| Poetic Haven |
|
jaded |
|
Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
|
taunting the muscles of a sunken face so smooth yet valleys run through from the tears she spent crying with a haunting moan escaping from blue lips made of ice and lust she felt once because now pushed out of her though she wept and the scars you still watch there is never a place to get rid of all your memories time and place has become a thing of her past with sweaty palms she wipes the grease off her face scared again she buries herself between your voice each strand of webs not counted for as muffled cries are heard through the sad love songs blaring its an unconscious thought passing through her mind that kills her instantly for she never lived innocence takes her away from her soul her casing left for you to admire from afar though she has been gone for a while you need not notice her spinning yarns a tale of gratitude for killing her spirit with the blood wisps of hair come floating down into your eyes onto your mirror as you gaze at the reflection a whisper is heard far away as she stole putting away her books there is left a single strand you can still smell her as you see her standing in you doorway a shaded figure falling into your arms never to let a tear fall from the center of the last time you kissed * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * [This message has been edited by Riley (09-01-2003 11:18 AM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Riley Grant - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
ugg..i have nothing to say. really really good. and you thought I would ignore this? I was just waiting for someone else but they don't know what they are missing. and look- shiney...I have a shiney star. insanity is not a crime |
||
|
bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Dare I ask what inspired this?  |
||
|
Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
wind- yes it is quite a beautiful star and i thank you much for the reply bsquirrel- um...let me think, probably a song more or less and the current feelings running through my mind ex. a guy * what else is new * and a lot of other things the song? jaded by mest and benji madden... riley * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
||
|
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Riley . . . this entirely blew me away innocence takes her away from her soul her casing left for you to admire from afar though she has been gone for a while you need not notice her spinning yarns a tale of gratitude for killing her spirit with the blood wisps of hair come floating down into your eyes onto your mirror as you gaze at the reflection a whisper is heard far away as she stole putting away her books there is left a single strand you can still smell her as you see her standing in you doorway a shaded figure falling into your arms never to let a tear fall from the center of the last time you kissed God, where did this come from? Quite amazing . . . xxoo |
||
|
bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'm impressed. |
||
|
Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
littlewing- thank you very much...this came from the land inside my head..i have a very different thought process from many, and this is what comes..... bsquirrel- i can't thank you enough * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
||
|
Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
wasn't headstorng..or rip. that's a surprise  insanity is not a crime |
||
|
Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
blah to you liz.....jaded is an awesome song...leave it and the lead singer is HOTT! yes...so is benji madden...he's mine stay away..i love coffee, and benji and some guy that lives down the street from me that skates...its going to be a lonnnnnngggg night...yep * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
