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Riley
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in the pouring rain


0 posted 08-31-2003 10:09 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Riley

bodies are cascaded with a lonely coldness
taunting the muscles of a sunken face
so smooth yet valleys run through
from the tears she spent crying with a haunting moan
escaping from blue lips made of ice and lust
she felt once because now pushed out of her

though she wept and the scars you still watch
there is never a place to get rid of all your memories
time and place has become a thing of her past
with sweaty palms she wipes the grease off her face
scared again she buries herself between your voice
each strand of webs not counted for as muffled cries
are heard through the sad love songs blaring

its an unconscious thought passing through her mind
that kills her instantly for she never lived
innocence takes her away from her soul
her casing left for you to admire from afar
though she has been gone for a while
you need not notice her spinning yarns a tale of gratitude
for killing her spirit with the blood

wisps of hair come floating down into your eyes
onto your mirror as you gaze at the reflection
a whisper is heard far away as she stole
putting away her books there is left a single strand
you can still smell her as you see her standing
in you doorway a shaded figure falling into your arms
never to let a tear fall
from the center of the last time you kissed



* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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1 posted 09-01-2003 08:13 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

ugg..i have nothing to say. really really good. and you thought I would ignore this? I was just waiting for someone else but they don't know what they are missing. and look- shiney...I have a shiney star.

insanity is not a crime

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2 posted 09-02-2003 07:06 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Dare I ask what inspired this?
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3 posted 09-02-2003 09:28 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

wind- yes it is quite a beautiful star and i thank you much for the reply

bsquirrel- um...let me think, probably a song more or less and the current feelings running through my mind ex. a guy * what else is new * and a lot of other things

the song? jaded by mest and benji madden...


riley

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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4 posted 09-03-2003 11:06 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Riley . . .
this entirely blew me away

innocence takes her away from her soul
her casing left for you to admire from afar
though she has been gone for a while
you need not notice her spinning yarns a tale of gratitude
for killing her spirit with the blood

wisps of hair come floating down into your eyes
onto your mirror as you gaze at the reflection
a whisper is heard far away as she stole
putting away her books there is left a single strand
you can still smell her as you see her standing
in you doorway a shaded figure falling into your arms
never to let a tear fall
from the center of the last time you kissed

God, where did this come from?
Quite amazing . . .
xxoo
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5 posted 09-03-2003 01:23 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

I'm impressed.
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6 posted 09-03-2003 08:08 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

littlewing- thank you very much...this came from the land inside my head..i have a very different thought process from many, and this is what comes.....


bsquirrel- i can't thank you enough

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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7 posted 09-04-2003 09:57 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

wasn't headstorng..or rip. that's a surprise

insanity is not a crime

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8 posted 09-06-2003 10:17 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

blah to you liz.....jaded is an awesome song...leave it and the lead singer is HOTT! yes...so is benji madden...he's mine stay away..i love coffee, and benji and some guy that lives down the street from me that skates...its going to be a lonnnnnngggg night...yep

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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