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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2003-08-31 02:51 PM



Following my most recent
clutch of stupid words,
she informed me
in no uncertain terms
that she'd like to castrate me
with a garlic press.

This statement
took admirable imagination.
She wouldn't immediately go
for the blunt steel-eyed pain of a hammer,
the sleek tactile sting
in a pair of just-sharpened scissors.

This is why I'm always crouching.
And another reason
why I love her.

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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
1 posted 2003-08-31 03:41 PM


lmao she is creative yes..
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2003-08-31 03:49 PM


lol... ouch.
gemjop
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3 posted 2003-08-31 09:33 PM




I like her.

another library addition.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

bsquirrel
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4 posted 2003-08-31 10:23 PM


Oh yeah, she rocks. I had to take that specific Lori-ism and turn it into a poem.

See what I'll be up to on Saturday: www.bubastis.com/funeral

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-09-01 11:04 AM


sadomasochisticgothicpoeticbeauty
Mikey
xxoo

Wind
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6 posted 2003-09-01 11:44 AM


ha...

insanity is not a crime

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
7 posted 2003-09-01 11:50 PM


Happy that things are good(?) hehe

"and another reason....."

Cool, squirrel dude


Ed

Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
8 posted 2003-09-02 02:30 PM


Wow.. sure sounds fiesty.
bsquirrel
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9 posted 2003-09-02 04:05 PM


She be.

See what I'll be up to on Saturday: www.bubastis.com/funeral

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