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Kaoru
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0 posted 08-27-2003 07:57 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kaoru

You said in your letters
that you could
not wait
for me.

You'd cross
in my shoes
and misunderstand

my loss.

so do
comfort

rest your
cold hands upon
a
once rose cheek.

a muffled voice I
keep you from
saying it too soon.
© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-27-2003 10:34 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allysa

this almost caused tears to well up in my eyes..

nice write.
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space


2 posted 08-28-2003 01:45 AM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

I'd agree with alyssa but my tear ducts aren't functioning properly  or i'm just back to numb..regardless nice write
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3 posted 08-28-2003 10:06 AM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

painnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.

this reminds me of my own personal moment, i wish i could forget.

you make it real.

damn youre good.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

littlewing
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4 posted 08-28-2003 10:55 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

probably in a very different way than quite intended - this brought tears to these eyes
nice Meg
xxoo
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5 posted 08-28-2003 01:07 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

No need to cry, 'cause I see the strength in this.
 
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