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gemjop
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0 posted 08-27-2003 07:49 AM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for gemjop


It only takes
one sense making thought

to go back to where you de railed
my motion

won't peddle faster
speed
nauseates me
always has
always will

reminds me of falling

out
of
control

don't want my feet
on the pedals

but hands upon
steering wheel

or is it

the other way

around

deciding which?

I'm tired of

decisions

having them

and
not
.
.
.
.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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Wind
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1 posted 08-27-2003 10:11 AM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

I never quote you because its all so good. stop being so good. is it a train or a car or a plane? we'll never know. Liz will sut up now and keep her words to herself

insanity is not a crime

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space


2 posted 08-27-2003 04:15 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

I know the out of control gig
Kaoru
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3 posted 08-27-2003 06:26 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Ditto, Raffie..

What about a bike built for two..

...really slow people?

Nicole
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4 posted 08-27-2003 09:26 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

I like to walk.  heh  Though, I've been known to fall UP stairs, so maybe that's not such a good thing?  

I loved this:
"It only takes
one sense making thought

to go back to where you de railed
my motion"

I got a lot out of this poem, I had an image of two people fighting over control of the emotional movement, or depth, of a relationship.  I enjoy the depth, girlie.

Nic
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5 posted 08-28-2003 10:53 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

seems like every day don't it now?
nice gemma
xxoo

to go back to where you de railed
my motion
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6 posted 08-28-2003 01:08 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

You can even make the wreckage sing. That's talent.
 
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