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Advice to the Diarist with Divorcing Parents

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fractal007
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0 posted 08-26-2003 04:31 AM       View Profile for fractal007   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for fractal007

Pulled, twisted, brought to life, a
spirit of the cynical self, and
loaded down with costly strife, a
willingness to harden my self.
Torn, severed, caught in war, an
ignorant child, a boastful boy taught
both to fight and to abhor an
evil force that hurt this boy.

bare witness to these crimes
note the happenings of these times
take your pen and paper and write
list each tear and scar in their fight
don't forget for they will lie
don't let the memory die
let each scream and word of hate
guard history and keep it straight.

2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2
--Smit
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1 posted 08-26-2003 12:43 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

You write of "indeed", me and my brain like that.
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Wonderful writing Fractal... a one for the library.

Rawr, rawr, rawr

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Marshal:

Thanks for the reply.  I appreciate being placed into the library of a fairly significant poet around here.

Kaoru:

Thanks for the reply.

2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2
--Smit
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