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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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brilliant blue takes her over as she falls even more into the flooding rains tears so silently wept as the corners fade of a folded kiss she kept hidden away that circle her eyes with a darkened glow so tightly that she is restricted from who she was but the past scares her more than her future so she has neither but only a presence only her tears with the pain inside hidden from everyone that she loves and knows yet this is not her want, not my want your hand feels mine and mine feels yours no longer do i ever feel scared in your eyes only accepted as a haunted soul with a vision to be held in front of me while you take me with a lonely mind one step before time * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
An interesting read. 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
fractal- i don't know what to say...thank you or hmmm...it might have been interesting, i don't know, but i was just trying to vent a lot. i have to much going on and i can't take it...but thank you so much for reading my poem and replying to it * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
More from you, please. You don't want to see a squirrel beg. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
if you had roots, you'd be a tree. thats how we all know that things stay alive. maybe I'll make sense someday. then again..maybe not. poetic perfection. we see blood everytime the pen bleeds. insanity is not a crime |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
bsquirrel- i shall try and a begging squirrel hmmm this i might like to see. liz- hey windy what shakin....thanks for replying.....you'll never make sense, its an unwritten law in the world of a poet. it just is. thats how everything is, it is just. and blood. neato! riley * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
always..always..always  I am bored. insanity is not a crime |
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