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Riley
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in the pouring rain


0 posted 08-25-2003 10:05 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Riley


winds hollow out her sunken eyes even more
brilliant blue takes her over as she falls
even more into the flooding rains
tears so silently wept as the corners fade
of a folded kiss she kept hidden away


the letters crease her old scars
that circle her eyes with a darkened glow
so tightly that she is restricted from who she was
but the past scares her more than her future
so she has neither but only a presence


the blood running down your face
only her tears with the pain inside
hidden from everyone that she loves and knows
yet this is not her want, not my want
your hand feels mine and mine feels yours
no longer do i ever feel scared in your eyes
only accepted as a haunted soul
with a vision to be held in front of me
while you take me with
a lonely mind one step before time

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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1 posted 08-26-2003 04:35 AM       View Profile for fractal007   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fractal007

An interesting read.  

2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2
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2 posted 08-26-2003 08:30 AM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

fractal- i don't know what to say...thank you or hmmm...it might have been interesting, i don't know, but i was just trying to vent a lot. i have to much going on and i can't take it...but thank you so much for reading my poem and replying to it

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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3 posted 08-26-2003 12:22 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

More from you, please. You don't want to see a squirrel beg.
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4 posted 08-26-2003 04:53 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

if you had roots, you'd be a tree. thats how we all know that things stay alive. maybe I'll make sense someday. then again..maybe not.

poetic perfection. we see blood everytime the pen bleeds.

insanity is not a crime

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5 posted 08-26-2003 06:53 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

bsquirrel- i shall try and a begging squirrel hmmm this i might like to see.

liz- hey windy what shakin....thanks for replying.....you'll never make sense, its an unwritten law in the world of a poet. it just is. thats how everything is, it is just.

and blood. neato!


riley

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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6 posted 08-27-2003 12:35 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

always..always..always

I am bored.

insanity is not a crime

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