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gemjop
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0 posted 08-23-2003 07:19 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for gemjop

It is obvious
the most tame
of things
can keep you
from me

Forgive me
If I tear down
every song
you gave me

Rebuild them
as ~mine~

They
never let
me go
.
.
.
.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow


1 posted 08-23-2003 07:49 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

"Forgive me
If I tear down
every song
you gave me

Rebuild them
as ~mine~"

Amazing, Gem.
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2 posted 08-23-2003 08:06 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

Wiiild horses..couldn't drag me awaay. You always remind me of some song. An I end up singing or something. heh. I l*ve it times a thousand. and one. REALLY REALLY.

insanity is not a crime

Nicole
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3 posted 08-23-2003 10:19 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Oh, this:

"It is obvious
the most tame
of things
can keep you
from me"

Yes, yes, yes - I have thought this exactly once, it's amazing to see it in a poem.  What a clearly unique and purely real statement.

"They
never let
me go"

No, they don't - do they.  This is a great write, I enjoyed it immensely.

Nicole
gemjop
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4 posted 08-24-2003 07:35 AM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

Thankyouyou little sweethearts.

He once said that when he listened to wild horses, it reminded him of me. It was a song we both shared a love of.

It is sucha powerful song full of emotion, and I didn't want it to be forever reminding me of how he was dragged away so easily. well, he walked away.

Its so difficult, and I have so many songs I need to unnattach memories of him from, theyre just too good to never be able to listen to them again!

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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5 posted 08-24-2003 03:53 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

Why bother asking for his forgiveness? (I know, I did too) just do it *big hugs* good to see you again Gem

There's nothing like a good fight with a horse to put your problems into perspective
Happy Trails To You

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6 posted 08-26-2003 12:20 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Another wonderful poem.
littlewing
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7 posted 08-26-2003 04:32 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

for a very long time, gem, I could'nt listen to a lot of music, sometimes still cant . . . but one day you will look at these things with new light . . . and yes, much too good of a tune to not listen to.  beautiful writing, as always
check your mail . . . was tinkering around  *smile*
xxoo  
Aenimal
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8 posted 08-27-2003 04:19 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

Rebuild them
as ~mine~
great thought I had to do the same with quite a few songs in my life
 
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