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Wind
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0 posted 08-21-2003 09:23 AM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Wind


at a break in the atmosphere,
I find my reasons,
not to hold my breath.

Iíve been taught
to cry-
childish tears
over paper cuts

scream like the alarm went off
because itís right there:
in front of you

You must be blind.

Long nights,
sleepless nights

Dog chases cat
cat chases mouse
echoes are nothing to me
but an endless circle

always so full of hope:
stargazer (might as well watch the sun)
optimistic (you're only fooling yourself)
insane (I fit right in)


labels are endless

Survive a day as me
and guess what-
you win.

She knows what she wants,
she knows who she wants,
she knows what she is,
and what she must become

Long nights,
Sleepless nights

'I donít believe you,
you arenít real.'

Blacktop melting,
3 meals a day-
I can taste it now

[This message has been edited by Wind (08-22-2003 08:10 AM).]

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1 posted 08-21-2003 09:49 AM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

scream like the alarm went off
because itís right there:
in front of you

You must be blind.



nuff said.
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2 posted 08-21-2003 11:22 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Indeed, Wind..

Excellent.
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3 posted 08-21-2003 11:42 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

thanks blue and meg.

insanity is not a crime

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4 posted 08-21-2003 11:56 PM       View Profile for fractal007   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fractal007

This is a cool stream of consciousness poem.  You might like to watch spelling though.  

However, on the whole, this poem hit a cool chord with me and for some reason creates a neat vibe in my mind as I read it.  

2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2
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5 posted 08-22-2003 07:25 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

I enjoyed this poem - it has the sting of desolation to it.  There are quite a few lines that stood out to me.  Well done  
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6 posted 08-22-2003 09:18 AM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

oh..I see the error, thanks. Didn't catch that one

insanity is not a crime

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in the pouring rain


7 posted 08-24-2003 10:24 AM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

liz-- liz liz liz, hey gurlie ( LOL! ) i haven't seen something from ya in like...what forever. i look round all the time for the windy poems, but i cannot find them...and what does this mean? wind needs to post more i do believe. just to please tha bunny. i loved this....as i always do....o yea and :resisting urge to mention songs: but anyways.....

amazing...loved it


riley leanne

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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8 posted 08-24-2003 10:35 AM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

Riley? I've seen you pop in for like 3 seconds and leave. heh. what song? TELL ME. unless it is like..rap or somethin. then I don't wannna know. And I have to been posting. there was another one but I already forget what it was called. haha. Look whose talking. you are the one not posting

insanity is not a crime

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9 posted 08-24-2003 11:06 AM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

"Dog chases cat
cat chases mouse
echoes are nothing to me
but an endless circle"

Well if it's not the amazing disappearing Wind!!!  Where ya been slacker????  Drop me a line when ya got a minute, I'm just hangin' out on the porch, soakin' up the morning sun...
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10 posted 08-24-2003 11:24 AM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

hey hey missy wind...i post, you just don't notice... what a brat.i posted one in teen and get this...it RHYMES! and tha song is my very own trapt-headstrong...i love love love that song. baby that is tha best. i am so tired and bored. waiting for my buddies to get home.

LOVE YOU! sniffer


riley

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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11 posted 08-24-2003 11:28 AM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

ugh this is unbelievable! I keep going back in time. Ducan- thats why they call you a porch puppy. Drop a line? you have got to be the only person in the world that says that And Riley talks like she's my entourage. Lov ya too Riley- my people will call your people

insanity is not a crime

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12 posted 08-24-2003 11:42 AM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

i have people...where. please tell me where, cause i see no people....i am alone...in the corner of a dark room, writing sad poetry, with tears falling onto the ink smearing it, as the pages grow colder from glances untold by the truth i write. its a poet's dream and my reality that's the only thing i can depend on.

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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13 posted 08-24-2003 12:16 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

I see dead people I don't know about your 'rules' but I usualy don't post a new poem untill the old one falls of the last day page. I know. its a stupid rule

insanity is not a crime

[This message has been edited by Wind (08-24-2003 12:18 PM).]

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14 posted 08-24-2003 01:57 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

i have rules? where....i just post...




gotta luv me!

ri

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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15 posted 08-26-2003 12:19 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Great poem. A sort of quest to feel whole, and instead, feeling holes.
 
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