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Kaoru
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0 posted 08-21-2003 01:42 AM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kaoru

iron fist
lung

crossing
just above
my eye.


so rust
i can hear
you breathe.
© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-21-2003 09:08 AM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

I really liked the sound of this

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2 posted 08-21-2003 09:51 AM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

*scared*

should I be?

this gave me chills.
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Indeed.  You just transported me back to a time of a tale...one that I did not personally live through, only knew from the sound of my mother's voice, of her time in the iron lung when she was paralyzed with infantile paralysis as a teen.  She was one of the lucky ones...

Very good, Meghan.
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4 posted 08-22-2003 12:02 AM       View Profile for fractal007   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fractal007

For a moment I thought your screen name was Karouak, like the american beat poet.  This poem sounds a bit like one of his "haiku."  Still, however, the meaning of this poem is rather unclear.

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Meg, extremely insightful . . .
Goodness . . . xxoo

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amazing
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Ooo, I love this. Potent.
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me bumps this one too!!! Liz's favorites bumping day. my poem is lonely

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All walls are great, if the roof doesn't fall.
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9 posted 10-13-2003 09:09 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

and I was going to serinade you but I forgot half the words...

'this is our new song..something something..my iron lung'

 
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