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littlewing
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0 posted 08-16-2003 11:53 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for littlewing

Shrouded bones
throwing stones
skipping stream
across the nothing - ness - essary
dreams
Wisp of wind
through weathered wings
longing to touch down
again

[This message has been edited by littlewing (08-16-2003 11:56 PM).]

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majnu
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1 posted 08-17-2003 02:39 AM       View Profile for majnu   Email majnu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for majnu

a strange coupling of two distince poems, in my opinion.

a lot to think on.

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Aenimal
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2 posted 08-17-2003 10:47 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

nothing - ness - essary

nice wordplay and i see what manju is saying..disjointed images but i like how you put them together
littlewing
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3 posted 08-17-2003 11:28 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

thanks guys . . . disjointed thoughts for sure and yes they do read as two seperate
ideas . . .
xxoo
gemjop
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4 posted 08-18-2003 06:19 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

reminded me of sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me...was that the saying? what a load of cobblers....words can kill...

this to me...has a feeling of isolation and hopelessness, and still, a determination.



stop making me think so much!!!

Instant karma's gonna get you.

littlewing
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5 posted 08-19-2003 01:18 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

ahahhaa whoever made up that rhyme is ill . . . I would rather have had sticks and stones tossed at me than words, any day
Thanks gem
xxoo
 
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