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serenity blaze
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0 posted 08-14-2003 11:47 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

A hand in place
two fingers spread
so my good eye peeks--
there's drums
I hear them
when you speak
as this moment digs the grave
rocking
rhythm'd
Africa....
where the wild things have no keep.

I know where the berries grow--
"Captain, would you plot the course?"
tell me tales of bravery
in the days when seas could drop
an ending
just like...that

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where the wild flowers grow


1 posted 08-15-2003 03:07 AM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Seren -

You write everything with an aura about you..

Something that screams "I know".

I love it.
Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 08-15-2003 01:17 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

"where the wild things have no keep"

Shoot..that is my house.

He does write a journey well..doesn't he?

Well done..again.

Susan
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...


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"A hand in place
two fingers spread
so my good eye peeks--
there's drums
I hear them
when you speak
as this moment digs the grave
rocking
rhythm'd
Africa....
where the wild things have no keep."


I just love this...
I hear it...I see it...I'm THERE...

Hugs, you..

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

littlewing
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4 posted 08-16-2003 10:47 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

this is brilliant K

in the days when seas could drop
an ending
just like...that

*smiling* only you would think of such lines . . . but then again thats what makes you magnetic
xxoo
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5 posted 08-20-2003 01:12 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Oh yes, those cataracts are something else. Hmm ... now I might have to write a poem on great walls of water crashing to the earth...

Great to read you, Sen.
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6 posted 08-21-2003 09:17 AM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

you want me to say something? I loved the pictures this brought me. the adventures I used to picture when I was little.

insanity is not a crime

 
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