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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space


0 posted 08-14-2003 11:20 AM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aenimal

blue tinted visions
an open field barren
what thoughts may grow
are quickly extirpated
or buried under idled soil

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Dark Angel
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1 posted 08-14-2003 06:50 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Wonderful images Sir Raph.

It's always a pleasure reading you m'friend.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

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where the wild flowers grow


2 posted 08-15-2003 03:06 AM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Hey,
this..this I'm diggin.

It's not so often
that you have these kind of words..
Well, that's just me..you're always good..
Nicole
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3 posted 08-15-2003 07:48 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

See?  Whenever I write, it's just a barren field - heh, maybe a weed here and there.     I like this, nicely done.
Aenimal
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4 posted 08-16-2003 04:47 AM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

Thanks Maree you know the feeling's mutual

Thanks Meg glad its dug, dig?

Thanks Nicole appreciate it. nice comments and a little self depreciation.. grins


gemjop
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5 posted 08-18-2003 06:36 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

hmmmmmm. strawberry fields forever?

nope this field sounds like the kind of hellish field i am living in.

liking, no loving this one for reasons i cannot explain. except of course b cos its good, but y know woorra mean right?

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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6 posted 08-18-2003 09:34 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

heh..'I dug it.' heh heh. I really did

insanity is not a crime

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7 posted 08-19-2003 08:09 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

Idle soil? or Barren? ( chuckling)

nice short piece to make one think Raph..as usual... I enjoyed
Aenimal
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thanks everbody..i'll just leave it open to interpretation
 
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