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Riley
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in the pouring rain

0 posted 2003-08-13 09:45 PM



your touch reminded me of someone
that had electricity in their eyes
never seemed to real for me
yet to fake to stop believing in love
pain was the kiss I felt
it left a glow forever
as the world darkened around my face
leaving you to stand for me
not a choice but more a sign for now


black hugs around me still as I break away
from everything but you


* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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1 posted 2003-08-14 10:01 AM


I got a bit lost in the poem here and there, bt in the end, it's clearly shown how much you love this person, or, at least, need to. Nice write.

~Titus

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Riley
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2 posted 2003-08-14 07:08 PM


Titus, thank you so much for replying..and its more like needing him to.

love,
riley

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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3 posted 2003-08-26 12:26 PM


Reminds me of the Cure. That's a compliment.
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4 posted 2003-08-26 12:45 PM


Black hugs.. electrical..

My mind is frazzled by this, I love it.

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5 posted 2003-08-26 04:50 PM


course I know what shes talking about dark kisses. evil and love together, she must be insane

insanity is not a crime

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6 posted 2003-08-26 06:50 PM


BSquirrel- thank you so much for that

Kaoru-glad you enjoyed so much....

Windy- Liz i am insane evil and very roadkill pretty. yep...i am dark that who i only ever will be and maybe someday...i'll know what i am doing

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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