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Riley
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in the pouring rain


0 posted 08-13-2003 09:45 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Riley


your touch reminded me of someone
that had electricity in their eyes
never seemed to real for me
yet to fake to stop believing in love
pain was the kiss I felt
it left a glow forever
as the world darkened around my face
leaving you to stand for me
not a choice but more a sign for now


black hugs around me still as I break away
from everything but you


* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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I got a bit lost in the poem here and there, bt in the end, it's clearly shown how much you love this person, or, at least, need to. Nice write.

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Titus, thank you so much for replying..and its more like needing him to.

love,
riley

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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Reminds me of the Cure. That's a compliment.
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4 posted 08-26-2003 12:45 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Black hugs.. electrical..

My mind is frazzled by this, I love it.
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5 posted 08-26-2003 04:50 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

course I know what shes talking about dark kisses. evil and love together, she must be insane

insanity is not a crime

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6 posted 08-26-2003 06:50 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

BSquirrel- thank you so much for that

Kaoru-glad you enjoyed so much....

Windy- Liz i am insane evil and very roadkill pretty. yep...i am dark that who i only ever will be and maybe someday...i'll know what i am doing

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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